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Enjoying the series, although I have a little constructive criticism -
I have just finished this story and purchased the second in the series, "The Crystal Ship." To me this story flowed well throughout, there was decent action going on for most of the story, and the setting and diversity of characters are interesting. It seems to be heading in the direction of a solid story about a reluctant hero who has to balance between many opposing sides. the one major fault I've found with the book, and I don't know if it is just me who is bothered by such things, is that the underlying science is misused. don't get me wrong I don't think e very sci fi writer should be a theoretical physicist, but I do think they should take a few minutes to look up the scope of space and how it will relate to the story. When I'm engrossed in the story and then come across, for instance that a rival faction lives in another galaxy 15 light years away it just causes me to pause and think, how is that supposed to make sense...The closest galaxy to us (and it's just a dwarf satellite galaxy that is being devoured by the milky way) is 25,000 light years away. And a lightyear is exactly that... The distance light travels in a year. So in order for someone to travel 60.4 ly's if they are going 15 times the speed of light it would not take 4 hours like it said in the story but 4 years. To do it in 4 hours they would have to be traveling roughly 133,152 times the speed of light (at least I think my math is close on that...). Other than basic background research like that that I feel is needed in a sci fi novel this is a quite enjoyable story, especially for free. I also gladly paid the 2.99 for the second and I'll be buying the third next.
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An ancient prophecy, a dying world, a human girl and a masked outlaw.
Hunters from the stars search a dying Earth for a golden girl child who will save the Atlantean Empire, the greatest power in the galaxy, from a monstrous alien that feeds on pain. Rayne and her brother fight to survive in a world gone mad, but a prophecy in an ancient tome is set to change their fate. The Drayconar Empire, rival of the Atlanteans, also searches for her, to slay her and prevent the prophecy from coming true so it can rule in Atlan’s stead.
An ancient black ship is Rayne’s guide, left behind to protect the survivors of one of the elder races, which died out millennia ago. Only five remain frozen in an endless sleep, waiting for the rest of the universe to evolve to their level. Soon the Crystal Ship will appear from another universe and carry the Envoy to Atlan to destroy it, and only Rayne can prevent that from happening, although she has no idea how.
While the Drayconar Empire plots Rayne’s death and the Atlanteans strive to protect her, a mysterious masked man known as the Shrike holds the power to save the Golden Child or let her die. He is a reviled slaver lord, leader of the third largest empire, and no friend of the Atlanteans, yet Rayne trusts him, and his enigma fascinates her.
Only one thing is inevitable; the Earth will die.
An ancient prophecy, a dying world, a human girl and a masked outlaw.
Hunters from the stars search a dying Earth for a golden girl child who will save the Atlantean Empire, the greatest power in the galaxy, from a monstrous alien that feeds on pain. Rayne and her brother fight to survive in a world gone mad, but a prophecy in an ancient tome is set to change their fate. The Drayconar Empire, rival of the Atlanteans, also searches for her, to slay her and prevent the prophecy from coming true so it can rule in Atlan’s stead.
An ancient black ship is Rayne’s guide, left behind to protect the survivors of one of the elder races, which died out millennia ago. Only five remain frozen in an endless sleep, waiting for the rest of the universe to evolve to their level. Soon the Crystal Ship will appear from another universe and carry the Envoy to Atlan to destroy it, and only Rayne can prevent that from happening, although she has no idea how.
While the Drayconar Empire plots Rayne’s death and the Atlanteans strive to protect her, a mysterious masked man known as the Shrike holds the power to save the Golden Child or let her die. He is a reviled slaver lord, leader of the third largest empire, and no friend of the Atlanteans, yet Rayne trusts him, and his enigma fascinates her.
Only one thing is inevitable; the Earth will die.
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Customer Review for this product :
Enjoying the series, although I have a little constructive criticism -
I have just finished this story and purchased the second in the series, "The Crystal Ship." To me this story flowed well throughout, there was decent action going on for most of the story, and the setting and diversity of characters are interesting. It seems to be heading in the direction of a solid story about a reluctant hero who has to balance between many opposing sides. the one major fault I've found with the book, and I don't know if it is just me who is bothered by such things, is that the underlying science is misused. don't get me wrong I don't think e very sci fi writer should be a theoretical physicist, but I do think they should take a few minutes to look up the scope of space and how it will relate to the story. When I'm engrossed in the story and then come across, for instance that a rival faction lives in another galaxy 15 light years away it just causes me to pause and think, how is that supposed to make sense...The closest galaxy to us (and it's just a dwarf satellite galaxy that is being devoured by the milky way) is 25,000 light years away. And a lightyear is exactly that... The distance light travels in a year. So in order for someone to travel 60.4 ly's if they are going 15 times the speed of light it would not take 4 hours like it said in the story but 4 years. To do it in 4 hours they would have to be traveling roughly 133,152 times the speed of light (at least I think my math is close on that...). Other than basic background research like that that I feel is needed in a sci fi novel this is a quite enjoyable story, especially for free. I also gladly paid the 2.99 for the second and I'll be buying the third next.
Check Best Price Here
More Detailed Product Description
An ancient prophecy, a dying world, a human girl and a masked outlaw.
Hunters from the stars search a dying Earth for a golden girl child who will save the Atlantean Empire, the greatest power in the galaxy, from a monstrous alien that feeds on pain. Rayne and her brother fight to survive in a world gone mad, but a prophecy in an ancient tome is set to change their fate. The Drayconar Empire, rival of the Atlanteans, also searches for her, to slay her and prevent the prophecy from coming true so it can rule in Atlan’s stead.
An ancient black ship is Rayne’s guide, left behind to protect the survivors of one of the elder races, which died out millennia ago. Only five remain frozen in an endless sleep, waiting for the rest of the universe to evolve to their level. Soon the Crystal Ship will appear from another universe and carry the Envoy to Atlan to destroy it, and only Rayne can prevent that from happening, although she has no idea how.
While the Drayconar Empire plots Rayne’s death and the Atlanteans strive to protect her, a mysterious masked man known as the Shrike holds the power to save the Golden Child or let her die. He is a reviled slaver lord, leader of the third largest empire, and no friend of the Atlanteans, yet Rayne trusts him, and his enigma fascinates her.
Only one thing is inevitable; the Earth will die.
An ancient prophecy, a dying world, a human girl and a masked outlaw.
Hunters from the stars search a dying Earth for a golden girl child who will save the Atlantean Empire, the greatest power in the galaxy, from a monstrous alien that feeds on pain. Rayne and her brother fight to survive in a world gone mad, but a prophecy in an ancient tome is set to change their fate. The Drayconar Empire, rival of the Atlanteans, also searches for her, to slay her and prevent the prophecy from coming true so it can rule in Atlan’s stead.
An ancient black ship is Rayne’s guide, left behind to protect the survivors of one of the elder races, which died out millennia ago. Only five remain frozen in an endless sleep, waiting for the rest of the universe to evolve to their level. Soon the Crystal Ship will appear from another universe and carry the Envoy to Atlan to destroy it, and only Rayne can prevent that from happening, although she has no idea how.
While the Drayconar Empire plots Rayne’s death and the Atlanteans strive to protect her, a mysterious masked man known as the Shrike holds the power to save the Golden Child or let her die. He is a reviled slaver lord, leader of the third largest empire, and no friend of the Atlanteans, yet Rayne trusts him, and his enigma fascinates her.
Only one thing is inevitable; the Earth will die.
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